If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments?
1) One of my bad habits is not being able to control my temper. 2) whenever anone makes me angry, I lose my temper and get invovled in arguments or fights. 3) I always regret having lost my temper and decide not to do it. 4) But it repeats again and sometimes i get invovled in big trouble.
Your sentences are great, but I think you can say
2-One of my bad habit is that I can't control my temper. it is clearer and easy to get.
2- anyone not anone
3-I always regret losing my temper
4-But it happens again
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