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  1. Newbie
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    please correct my sentences(student)

    i am a student.
    please correct my sentences.

    these are my sentences.
    Today, I decided about Mr. Asgarinejad’s situation. I wrote a letter to Mr. Shams as Venezuela’s program manager and said to him, it is better to be returned him. I said to Mrs. Fathi, it is a secret letter."

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    Re: please correct my sentences(student)

    Today, I decided to do something about Mr. Asgarinejad's situation. As Venezuela's Program Manager, I wrote a letter to Mr. Shams explaining that it would be best

      • to return _________ to Mr. Asgarinejad.
      • if Mr. Asgarinejad returned.
    I told Mrs. Fathi not to mention the letter to anyone, that it was our secret, just between the two of us.

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