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    please correct my sentences(student)1

    1-One of things that has occupied my mind for a long time is how can I speak and write fluently. So that I decided to write whatever is interesting in my mind. I hope, this procedure helps me.

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    I was worried yesterday, because I had a dream the day before yesterday. In my dream, I was crying and sad. The dream was related to my mother. In the morning, next day, I called to my mother to ask her health. I ask of god, keep her health for a long time.

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    I was worried yesterday because of a dream I had the day before. In my dream, I was crying and sad. The dream was about my mother. The next morning, yesterday, I called my mother to ask about her health. I asked God to keep her healthly for a long time.

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    thanks a lot for your help.
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    You're most welcome.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Soup View Post
    I asked God to keep her healthy for a long time.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    Thank you.

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