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    Can someone check and correct this letter please. In order to get a more usual constr


    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am one of your customer of your supermarket. I am writing to complain about a minor accident in the supermarket.

    My first day at your supermarket was an awful one. Last Monday at 10 A.M I came there for shopping. At that time the super market was partly crowded, so that was not good time for washing the floor specially with water and slippery substance, therefore everybody was gotten peeved for that as well.

    Unfortunately, when I was shopping, accidentally I slipped on the wet floor, and what is worse, I broken my leg. I must complain about carelessly your worker.

    In addition, Id like to suggest that your worker can do it when the shop is closed, or if they missed that time, they should dry the floor as soon as they washed.

    Finally, I trust these suggestion have been useful.


    Please give this matter your immediate attention.



    Yours faithfully


    Habibi




    Last edited by rezashena; 12-Aug-2008 at 16:49.


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    Re: Can someone check and correct this letter please. In order to get a more usual co

    Quote Originally Posted by rezashena View Post
    jj
    Try again!

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