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If you see any problems in the following sentences, can I have your comments?
1. I leave my room messy.In my room, you can see clothes and trashes everywhere on the floor.
2. Also, you can see me suffering from unnecssary anxieties.
3.Anxies cause me headache, so I often go to pc room to get rid of my anxiety.
Please allow me to have a go at this one.
1. I leave my room messy.In my room, you can see clothes and trash everywhere on the floor. ('trash' - uncountable)
2. Also, you can see me suffering from unnecessary anxieties. (It must have been a typo.)
3.Anxieties cause me headaches, so I often go to pc room( my computer room, probably?) to get rid of my anxiety. (Do you use your computer to get rid of your anxieties?)
As for 1., mine is also like yours...oh...it's catastrophic!
I'm not a native speaker of English.
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