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    inspection arrangement

    We noted the inspection date will be held on Sept 12; please provide us your mass production start date as this is request the online inspection. Please try to advance the production start date as you need have enough time for rework if there is any problem find during the online inspection.


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    Re: inspection arrangement

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We noted the inspection date will be held on Sept 12; please provide us your mass production start date as this is request the online inspection (see note below). Please try to advance the production start date as you need have enough time for rework if there are any problems found during the online inspection.
    I'm not sure about this sentence:

    please provide us your mass production start date as this is request the online inspection.

    Do you mean:

    please provide us your mass production start date as this is required/needed for the online inspection.


    Any
    - when suggesting an unspecific amount, any is used with a plural noun.
    ....if there are any problems.....

    If they find problems that have to be reworked, they will rework the problems that they found (past tense).


    I am not a teacher.



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    Exclamation Re: inspection arrangement

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We have noted that the inspection (date) will be held on Sept 12; please provide us your mass production start date as this is a request for the online inspection. Please try to advance the production start date as you need to have enough time for rework if there is any problem (find) during the online inspection.
    Delete the words in brackets

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