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    personal relations

    Can I have your comments for the following sentences?

    1. XX has good personal relations( or relationship) .

    2. He has powerful mental power and he is good at concentration.

    3. Once he starts something , he never stop concentrating untill he finishes it.

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    Re: personal relations

    1. XX has good personal relations( or relationship).
    => Two questions, what or who is XX and is the meaning you want to express here about personal relationships, personal relations (i.e., sex) or business relations?

    2. He has powerful mental power and he is good at concentration.
    => powerful mental power is redundant.
    => What about, he (has the ability to) concentrate(s) well?

    3. Once he starts something, he never stops concentrating until he finishes it.
    => concentrating works, but there are other ways to express your meaning; e.g., he's driven; when he starts something, he always finishes it.

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