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    Please correct my resume and cover letter.

    Jo Gu
    Room 502 No.61, South Jing Yu Road
    Shanghai, China
    Mobile Phone: 13601805658

    Seeking managerial position in the sales department of an international trade company.


    4 years of marketing analysis learning
    Personal ability of planning, organizing, and interpersonal communicating
    Computer literate: Windows XP, Microsoft Office, and Dream weaver4.0
    Native Chinese Speaker fluent in English: speaking, writing, reading
    Relevant English certificates:
    1. CET-6, January 2003.
    2. CET-4, June 2002.


    Shanghai University Shanghai, China
    Post-Diploma of Shanghai University in Economics and Trade Expected June 2005
    Member of Student Union from 2000 to 2003
    Won scholarship of Shanghai University three times

    East Shanghai Foreign Language School (high school) Shanghai, China
    Diploma received June 2000
    Won scholarship in 1999

    English course taken during university
    English Intermediary Interpretation, New World Language School (Shanghai), summer 2002


    Assistant of Sales Director, Shanghai Ying Tai International Trade Company, Shanghai China, Summer 2003
    1.Gathered useful marketing information through Internet or marketing research
    2.Organized and did some preliminary analysis on those information for the manager
    3.Scheduled the daily business affairs for the manager
    4.Prepared for important meetings and wrote meeting agendas

    Here is my cover letter

    October 16, 2004

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am greatly interested by the vacancy of an assistant for sales manager you advertised on yesterday’s issue of China Daily. I am presently a student for my BA in International Economy and Trade at Shanghai University.

    Last year, I was working as personal assistant for the sales manager of Shanghai Yingtai International Company as part of my fieldwork required by the degree. I started to develop my people skills in the real situation. Also I saw a great improvement in my skills of coordinating, leading and keeping aplomb in times of urgency. The experience reinforced my understanding of the importance and magic of nurturing an esprit de corps in the department. Mr. Chen, my manager at the department, acknowledged my commitment and the quickness to learn. He would be glad to tell you more about my times with him. He could be reached at 529,257,57.

    In my university, I have been excellent in both my academic performance and my after-class work as the member of Students’ Union. I am fluent in both Spoken and Written English. Mr. Terry Gao, our counselor, has kindly agree to write a reference for me if it is required.

    I am available for my interview every afternoon. Please contact me at 13601805658. Looking forward to hearing from you.

    Thank you for your consideration.

    Sincerely yours,
    Jo Gu

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    Join Date
    Sep 2003

    Re: Please correct my resume and cover letter.


    Resume and Cover Letter Examples: click here, and here, and here.

    All the best, :D

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