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    #1

    Please correct with my sentences

    We noticed the mass production will be started on August 28, is this schedule still keep it unchanged?

    I think we should request the customer to pay the addition charge for the declaration fee of USDxxx, as this order is split for two destination port for the customer requested after they placed order.

    We would like to quote the cost for the documentation fee of customs document.

    We would like confirm to you that 5000 pcs HY789 were delivered to the warehouse on August 15.


    Please keep us posted if there is any chance for the improve schedule.
    Last edited by Zoe2008; 16-Aug-2008 at 18:24.

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    Re: Please correct with my sentences

    We noticed that the mass production will start on August 28, will this schedule be unchanged?

    I think we should request the customer to pay the addition charge for the declaration fee of USDxxx, as this order is split for two destination port for the customer requested after they placed order.

    I think we should request that the customer to pay the additional charge for the declaration fee of USDxxx, as this order is split for two destination ports which the customer requested after they placed order.

    We would like to quote the cost for the documentation fee of customs document.

    We would like to quote the cost for the customs documentation fees.

    We would like confirm to you that 5000 pcs HY789 were delivered to the warehouse on August 15.

    We would like confirm to you that 5000 pieces of HY789 were delivered to the warehouse on August 15.

    Please keep us posted if there is any chance for the improve schedule.

    Please keep us posted if there is any chance for the schedule to improve.

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    Re: Please correct my sentences

    Say:
    We noticed that production will be started on August 28. Is the schedule still the same?

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    Re: Please correct with my sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I think we should request the customer to pay the addition charge for the declaration fee of USDxxx, as this order is split for two destination port for the customer requested after they placed order.
    I think we should request that the customer to pay the additional charge for the declaration fee of USDxxx, as this order is split for two destination ports which the customer requested after they placed the order.
    (You don't need to say mass production.)

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