cover letter and resume,please help me to correct

[elia]

Dear Mr Smith,
I would like to apply for the position of sales assistant in the trade department in your company which advertised in the website of ‘www.firstjob.com.’.
I feel I am well qualified for the position of sales assistant. I was a grade four student study in Shanghai University major in international economy and trade. I have enough knowledge about international export and import, and I have two months practice in such field in Bao Steel International Economic and Trade Inc. in the summer of 2004 which made me familiar with the business. I am an smart and enthusiastic person that can working with staff happily and compatibly.
A position in your company give me the opportunity to work full-time in the career that I love, and to contribute myself to your company that I would like.
A resume giving details of my qualifications and experience is attached.
I would be happy to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.
Your sincerely,
Elia
Here is my resume:


ELIA TANG
Room 501,#34,Waicuifeng Road,
Shanghai ,China. 201907
Home phone 56042581
Email [email protected]

Objective
Executive assistant or sales assistant position in sales department in the multinational corporation

Summary of Qualification
Ÿ Interpersonal Communication skill
Ÿ Planning and organization skills
Ÿ Certificate IV in English Studies-SILC Program
Ÿ Native Chinese speaker fluent in English speaking, reading, writing.
Ÿ Computer literate: Microsoft office, Windows XP Professional, Flash, Dreamwever
Ÿ Experience in teaching Mathematics, Chinese, English of middle school level
Ÿ Intimate interpersonal relationship with classmates
Ÿ Able to drive cars
Ÿ College English Test of Band 6

Education
Sydney Institution of Language and Commerce(SILC), Shanghai University Shanghai, China
Diploma of International Trade , June 2003
Bachelor of International Economic and Trade, June 2005

Experience
Alps Electronical company Shanghai,China Worked as a assistant in Procurement Department in Alps Electronical company, helping ordering, arranging and filling in the material. In addition, worked in telephone service part of the company.

Shanghai Baosteel International Economic&Trade Co.,Ltd Shanghai,China
Worked as a business assistant in Trade Equipment&Engineering Department, dealing with import and export items.

[Casiopea]

Welcome

Resume and Cover Letter Examples: click here, and here, and here.

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[elia]

Dear Casiopea,
Thank you for your help.
I will correct the mistakes i made in my cover letter and resume.
Your suggestion is helpful and useful for me.
Thank you once more.
Yours sincerely
Elia

[Tdol]

Ÿ Intimate interpersonal relationship with classmates
Ÿ Able to drive cars

Ÿ Good interpersonal relationships with classmates
Ÿ Full\clean driving licence