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    please correct my text

    After tidy up those CDs, there are only 2 boxes instead of 3 now. I will arrange them by mail to your daughter in France. But it cannot exceed 30 kgs for each time; therefore, I will mail one box first to see any problem during the mailing / transportation and send / mail the second box after your daughter is receive the first one. I will keep you posted on the status. Please call me if there is any problem for this arrangement.

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    After tidy up those CDs, there are only 2 boxes instead of 3 now. I will arrange them by mail to your daughter in France. But it cannot exceed 30 kgs for each time; therefore, I will mail one box first to see any problem during the mailing / transportation and send / mail the second box after your daughter is receive the first one. I will keep you posted on the status. Please call me if there is any problem for this arrangement.
    only => just
    arrange => sent
    is receive => receives
    for => in

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    After tidying up those CDs, there are now only 2 boxes instead of 3. I will arrange for them to be sent by by mail to your daughter in France. But each box cannot exceed 30 kgs; therefore, I will mail one box first to see if there is any problem and will send the second box after your daughter has received the first one. I will keep you posted on the status. Please call me if there is any problem with this arrangement.
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