Dear Sir or Madam,
Tel: (021) 5*****3, cell: 138******39
Room *** No.*** Lane **, Zhongtan Road. Shanghai, 200*** China
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Shanghai xinxin sports development Co. Ltd
Add: F23, CenturyBa-shiMansion, 398HuaihaiZhongRoad,shanghai200020, China
Tel: (86-21) 63840934
Fax: (86-21) 63860871
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October 16, 2004
Respected Madam or Sir:
Re: Application for secretary of chief match inspector
I will graduate from the Shanghai University, Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce with a 3 years degree in June of next year. My major is international trade and I am very interested in securing a position before I graduate, if possible.
I have long been hopeful of working for you after I graduate, because I consider you are the one of the finest company in Shanghai. I am sure that if I have the privilege of being an employee in your company, I will greatly increase my education and my experience while trying my best to do in the work team. Because I know that Xinxin Sports have undertaken Shanghai ATP, three WTA, F1 motor boat and so on, and will be the role of popularizing all matches to receive more world’s challenges. If you can give me the opportunity, then the company’s future means my future, I will truly work hard to be qualified the job. If not, please keep my name on your file, because I consider Xinxin sports has been the first choice in my mind.
I will be available during the weekdays in the morning for any interviews you may want to give, and hoping for your immediate reply.
School Shanghai University， Sydney Institute of Language and
Curriculum vitae Technological academy
Major International trade
Tel (021) 52****13 cell: 138******39
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Postal Code 200***
Address Room*** No.***Lane**, Zhongtan Road, Shanghai
To obtain a challenging position in an experienced and innovative team
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC), Shanghai University, Shanghai, China 2002-Present
BS in International Business
Got Scholarship in 2002-2003 semester.
Skilled in use of Win 2000/NT, Office 2000,and computer hardware.
Have a good command of both spoken and written English
Workexperience ·OCTOBER-NOVERBER, 2003, Research company to do part-time job for some research·
JUNE-AUGEST, 2004 In Shanghai Pudun technology development Co. Ltd. do business relating to financial, healthcare
Dear Sir or Madam,
To obtain a challenging position in an experienced team to make innovation team work
Objective- should be capitalised
You repeat 'team' in the sentence- why not try rephrasing it?
To obtain a challenging position in an experienced and innovative team.
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