I was rasied by a family with a strong belief in the importance of education. Being highly motivated by my parents, I have always striven to be the best student. Thus my academic performance has always been at the top of the class; I now want to further my education by working towards gaining my masters degree.
When i graduated from university, i sought employment and worked in a brilliant position; the job caused me to postpone the idea of pursuing my masters degree, but nonetheless, the desire to take the course stayed with me.
Now, after 2 years of experince and working, i feel that this is the time to make this important step in my life, so i have decided to apply for this scholarship as i want to promote my self, get more experince, help my community and gain a better postion in my job.
Besides, This scholarship will provide me with an opportunity to experience an international education. Being in a country with many students from different cultures and nationalities would be a great opportunity to get more experince and gain a better point of view which will be valuable to my future career. This will improve my ability to interact with other people from different cultures and better my skills when communicating with people of different nationalities.
To sum up, an ambitious person always needs to improve and build upon the skills needed to perform at ones best.
I have corrected some grammatical problems, but I do not know how a letter of this nature is supposed to be written. I am also not sure how it should end, so I haven't attempted to finish the letter. My amendments may have made it less suitable, so please seek advice from someone who knows more about letters of this kind.
Also, I noticed a recurring punctuation error.
You leave a space before and after your commas (aaa , aaa) - the space should only be after the comma (aaa, aaa).
I am not a teacher.
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