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    ranked

    If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

    1.He introduced new online games in the market and people loved them. His onligames become hit.

    2.He could pay back all the money to the bank and his company is ranked world top 10 in the game companies.

    3.In addition to producing tv progrmas, he also wants to produce music programs.


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    Re: ranked

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

    1.He introduced new online games to the market and people loved them. His onligames [Is this the name of a site or a mistyping?] became a hit.

    2.He was able to pay back all the money to the bank and his company is now ranked within the top 10 game companies.

    3.In addition to producing tv progrmas, he also [delete] wants to produce music programs.

    You do not need "also" as well as "In addition".

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