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    Mobile ad, Is this correct, Kindly help!!

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    Re: Mobile ad, Is this correct, Kindly help!!

    [quote=new2grammar;343328]
    Now flaunt your style and let the world know you have arrived. Get a LG mobile phone, loaded with all features you could dream of!

    Enjoy your favourite music with one push of a button. Take photographs to capture the beautiful moments of life,
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