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    Please check my editorial

    The three terrorists holed themselves up in the house. Police was wary to take any immediate action because seven civilians were trapped inside. The owner of the house had gone to buy some household stuff, when he came back, he was shocked to see barricades of military in and around his house. He requested to military chief do what hell you want to but I want my family members safe and secure, which includes three children of 6 to 9 year old.


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    Re: Please check my editorial

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    The three terrorists holed themselves up in the house. Police was The police were wary to take of taking any immediate action because seven civilians were trapped inside. The owner of the house had gone to buy some household stuff, and when he came back, he was shocked to see barricades of military in and around his house. He requested to told the military chief "Do the hell what you want to but I want my family members safe and secure, which includes three children of 6 to 9 years old."
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    You mention police and then go on to say the military. In this country the police is a civilian force and separate from the military. Is it different in your country?

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    Re: Please check my editorial

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
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    You mention police and then go on to say the military. In this country the police is a civilian force and separate from the military. Is it different in your country?
    yes you are right they are two sdifferent security force.

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