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    #1

    Please check. . . . . . . ~

    1. Everyone wants to be success, but only few from them will/would be success.

    2. I'm entering a new real tough world.

    3. Words are not needed, but proves are needed.


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    Re: Please check. . . . . . . ~

    Quote Originally Posted by jomo27 View Post
    1. Everyone wants to be success, but only few from them will/would be success. "successful, but only a few [of them] will be."

    2. I'm entering a new real tough world. Either omit or alter to "really"

    3. Words are not needed, but proves are needed. "...proof is..." [Proof is uncountable]


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    #3

    Re: Please check. . . . . . . ~

    Thank you very much.

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    Re: Please check. . . . . . . ~

    Hello Tom
    Those are inspiring sentences! Well-done.
    Sara

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