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  1. Anonymous
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    New cover letter&resume

    Frank
    Room 218, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 ChengZhong Street, JiaDing District
    Shanghai, China, 200439 October 18, 2004
    Human resource manager: Zhuangyanmei
    200120 No.222 HuBin Road Shanghai Tel: 13816562635

    Dear Miss Zhang,
    First, I am glad that you see my e-mail. First, let me introduce myself. I am a student from shanghai university and my major subject is international business. I wish I can go to Sony after I graduate from the university. As the manager of human resource department, you gave your idea that Sony need what kind of people to a journalist of Renming newspapers. I saw the news. I think I am a good choice for you. You said that If the people is willing to learn and learn well in a short time, Sony could accept the student just graduate from the university. I am this kind of people I'm sure and I have some experience about communicating with foreign people. I wish you can give me a opportunity to make and interview with me. Thanks a lot .
    Yours sincerely,
    Frank

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    Frank my Chinese name:zhujinjie
    Room 218, Dormitory 7, NO. 22 ChengZhong Street, JiaDing District
    Shanghai, China, 200439 October 18, 2004
    Human resource manager: Zhuangyanmei
    200120 No.222 HuBin Road Shanghai Tel: 13816562635

    EDUCATION
    Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce, Shanghai university

    RELEVANT COURSE
    Office 2000
    Global Marketing
    Organization Behavior
    Financial Accounting
    Microeconomics / Macroeconomics
    Financial Accounting
    Global Finance
    International Business
    International Business Law
    International Commercial Law
    Money and Banking


    WORK EXPERIENCE
    International Business Assistant
    Zhonghen trade company Shanghai From june to August 2004
    I can use Office 2000 and speak English fluently.

    Objective: be a playstation 2 seller of Sony

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    First, I am glad that you see my e-mail. First, let me introduce myself.

    You can't have two 'firsts' and I wouldn't use this in a letter- it sounds like a talk.

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    Re: New cover letter&resume

    Yours sincerely,
    Frank


    I wouldn't use 'Frank'- that's for colleagues, not an application. Give first and family names.

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