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    I notice from Vivien that the mass production will be started on 18 Sept, but it is too late as the shipment originally is on August 05 which is one month overdue. We understand you are waiting for the testing results before, but Christine was already confirmed you that the passed results on Aug 30, so please try any effort to expedite the schedule to 05 Sept and catch vessel closing on 08 Sept. looking for you’re promptly reply.




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    Re: schedule

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    I notice from Vivien that the mass production will be started on 18 Sept, but this is too late as the shipment originally is on was originally scheduled for August 05 which is so this will make it one month overdue. We understand you are waiting for the testing results before starting production, but Christine has already confirmed to you that the passed results inspection results were released on Aug 30, so please try any make everyeffort to expedite the schedule to complete this batch by 05 Sept and in order to catch vessel closing on 08 Sept. looking for you’re promptly reply.Looking for your prompt reply.

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    Re: schedule

    What do you mean by "I notice from Vivien"? She told you?



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    Re: schedule

    Yes, I will remember it teacher Anglika (I know I was to used this incorrect word so many times)

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    Re: schedule

    Hi teacher RonBee,

    Yes, my meaning is Vivien told me.

    Am I correct to write the sentence for 'I notice from Vivien'?

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    Re: schedule

    "I notice from Vivien" is quite original, but originality is not always a good thing. (I was able to guess from context what was intended.)

    Perhaps:
    Vivien and I were discussing _________, and she told me that production will start on 18 Sept. That will make the shipment overdue as it was originally scheduled for 05 Aug.


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    Re: schedule

    "I notice from ....." is a phrase I would recognise from many business dealings. It is a colloquialism, but not one that really worried me. I am taking it that Zoe's correspondents understand her in this.

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    Re: schedule

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    "I notice from ....." is a phrase I would recognise from many business dealings. It is a colloquialism, but not one that really worried me. I am taking it that Zoe's correspondents understand her in this.
    OK. (That use of "notice" is brand new to me.)

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