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  1. #1
    summergoo Guest

    please give me some advice

    Personal information
    English name: Summer Chinese name: Gu Xiaping
    Sex: Female Date of birth: July 23,1983
    Place of birth: Shanghai Telephone: (021) 58142586
    Email address: [email protected] Marital Status: unmarried
    Objective
    Receptionist
    Education
    2002.9—2005.7 International Trades, Shanghai University
    Academic Main Courses
    International Trade Theory, International Business, Organization Behavior, Basic Marketing, Global Marketing and so on
    Skills
    Computer
    Generally skilled in operation of MS Windows & Office.
    English
    Past CET-4. Have a good command of written and read English.
    Work experience
    Summer in 2004 Worked in Shanghai Jing Kuang Corporation.
    Qualifications
    General Trade Knowledge and English Skills
    Have a passion to work and do my best to my job

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    October 15,2004
    [email protected]
    Dear Teacher Chen:
    Are you searching for a receptionist who can deal with some problems and give other’s help?
    I major in international Trade in Shanghai University. English studies my profession. Our Most of our teachers use English to teach us lessons, which improves my English at my university. And, I passed CET-4 during my study. So, I think I can use English with no problem.
    I am a open-minded girl and can get well along with others. At the same time, I am also willing to help others who are in trouble. Whenever they meet with problems, I will treat them warmly and help them to solve it.
    I have studied in some IELTS Learning Center, so I have knowledge and some information about IELTS learning. I believe I can do well in my position, even if I have no experience of this kind of jobs.
    The enclosed resume outlines my specific information and accomplishments in greater details. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

    Sincerely,
    Gu Xiaping (Summer)

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Dear Teacher Chen:

    We wouldn't use 'Teacher'as a titlein English; useMr\Ms, etc. We use Doctor and Professor as titles.

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    I would add some of the things you did in "Work Experience".

    I don't think its a good idea to begin a cover letter with a question.


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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    I agree with X Mode.

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