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    Kindly suggest me alternative options for this

    Following are the option i had come up with

    1. Celebrating 81st year

    2. Celebrating 81 years of sparkling success

    3. Celebrating 81 years of excellence

    4. 81 year celebration


    5. Celebrating 81 glorious years of stellar success

    Kindly advise me something on the saqme line but simple and powerful

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    Re: Kindly suggest me alternative options for this

    WHAT is being celebrated? A birthday? A business anniversary?

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    Re: Kindly suggest me alternative options for this

    Quote Originally Posted by susiedqq View Post
    WHAT is being celebrated? A birthday? A business anniversary?
    A business anniversary.....

    Also rewords the following

    Special offers inside to make you beautiful outside

    Charm meets elegance with the touch of exclusive offers


    Its the headline for magazine cover page
    Last edited by new2grammar; 02-Sep-2008 at 12:30.

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    Exclamation Re: Kindly suggest me alternative options for this

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Following are the option i had come up with

    1. Celebrating 81st year

    2. Celebrating 81 years of sparkling success

    3. Celebrating 81 years of excellence

    4. 81 year celebration


    5. Celebrating 81 glorious years of stellar success

    Kindly advise me something on the saqme line but simple and powerful


    The simplest and the most powerful slogan as it appears to me is:

    Celebrating 81 glorious years of achievments and success.

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