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    please correct my text


    I notice your separate email to Sandy for the schedule. Please copy me in your email, as I’m asking you for this before and I can not realize if you only sent it to her. Thank you for your cooperation. 2000 pcs of HU78 is a new model and request online inspection; please provide the mass production start date for us to perform the inspection. Thank you for your cooperation.
    Last edited by Zoe2008; 04-Sep-2008 at 16:25.

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    Exclamation Re: please correct my text

    Please mark a copy for me in your email, as I’m asking you for the schedules, otherwise how can I know when you have sent them to Sandy instead (of me)? 2000 pcs of HU78 which is a new model require (and request) online inspection. Please provide us the mass production start date (for) to perform the inspection. Thank you for your cooperation.

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