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  1. Kevin Lin
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    Kevin's Resume

    Kevin Lin (Student Number:02320569)
    Room 216, No 7, 20 ChengZhong Road
    Shanghai P.R. China
    Postcode: 201800
    Telephone: 69981036
    Mobile: 13764950056
    Email:[email protected]
    Date: 15/10/2004
    Job I want: Assistant of human resource management
    Company information: Shanghai Volkswagen Automotive Co. Ltd
    Address: Luo Pu Road Anting Shanghai 201805 China
    Post code: 201805
    Telephone: (021)59577275
    Email: [email protected]

    Dear Sir:
    Thanks for reading my self-recommend letter from your busying hour first, and give me a chance of success. I am a student of Shanghai University. After several months I will graduate from this school and looking for a job.
    During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. I have passed CET-6, which more important is that I can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to write and speak English is out of question.
    I am also skilled in use of MS Frontpage, HTML, Office XP, Photoshop, SQL Server, Visual Foxpro and so on.
    In addition, I take part in a variety of social activities actively, and catch every chance to exercise myself. In the three years, I work and study with top students. This makes me get progress in the competition, and grows up in the frustration.
    Here is my resume:
    Name: LinKaida(English name: Kevin)
    Sex: Male
    Date of birth: August 26,1984
    Address: 6#, FenXi Road, Zhabei District
    Status: Single
    Post: 200435
    Health: Excellent
    Email Address: [email protected]

    Education:
    2002.9-2005.6 Dept.of international business Graduate School of Shanghai University
    Computer abilities:
    skilled in use of MS Frontpage, HTML, Office XP, Photoshop, SQL Server, Visual Foxpro and so on

    English Skills:
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English Passed CET-6
    I appreciated your time in looking my material again and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

    With many thanks,

    LinKaida

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    Thanks for reading my self-recommend letter from your busying hour first,

    Have you already written a letter? That's what you are suggesting here. 'from your busying hour first' is not good English, I'm afraid.

    Thank you for taking the trouble to read my letter....

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