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    #1

    Check My Sentence Plz

    The products which are completed in this way,are ironed passing quality control,then they are brought ready for forwarding by packing

    Does it need correcting ?

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    Re: Check My Sentence Plz

    It sure does!

    What are you trying to say?

    The products which are completed in this way (in what way?)

    do you mean that they are ironed, THEN pass quality control?

    AND THEN they are ready to go to the packing department?

    How about:

    The products are completed in this way: they are ironed, then pass quality control, and are finally ready for the packaging department.

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