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    Kindly check sentences

    Offers that invoke a true celebration Add more colours to your festive celebrationsLord Ganesha’s blessing with exclusive offersLord Ganesha brings happiness and prosperity to your life


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    Re: Kindly check sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Offers that invoke a true celebration Too vague
    Add more colour to your festive celebrations
    Lord Ganesha’s blessing with exclusive offers Too blatant and not a slogan I would use.
    Lord Ganesha brings happiness and prosperity to your life
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