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  1. sunwenyu_25
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    Chris 02320618 My cover letter and resume.

    CHRIS
    Room 402, Building No.4, Branch lane 2, Lane1324, Shuidian Road, Hongkou District, Shanghai, Zip: 200434, P.R.China
    sunwenyu25@hotmail.com
    October 20 , 2004

    Mr. Zhang Ruimin
    Haier Group Company
    NO.1 Haier Road Hi-tech Zone Qingdao, Zip: 266101, P.R.China
    (0086) 532-8939999
    aqmeng@haiercct.com.cn

    RE: Marketing and Sales Department Recruitment Position

    Dear Mr. Zhang:
    I have known about your company Haier Group for several years and I really want to join this great family. Your advertisement for a Sales Assistant in Marketing and Sales Department interested me because the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am looking for.
    I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Shanghai University this year. My major is International Business Trade and I won second-class scholarship in 2004.
    During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice especially at marketing and sales field. Not only have I passed CET-4, but also more important I can communicate with others freely in English. My ability to listen, write and speak English is out of question.
    I would appreciate your time in reading my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please call me at 13764299667 to arrange a convenient time when we may meet to further discuss my background in relation to your needs.
    I am looking forward to have a personal interview with you.

    Yours sincerely,

    Chris
    WenYu Sun


    Here is my resume.


    RESUME

    Personal Information
    Name: WenYu Sun
    English name: Chris
    Sex: female
    Date of birth: Feb.5th, 1984
    Marital status: unmarried
    Tel:(0086)021-65253463
    E-mail: sunwenyu25@hotmail.com
    Address: Room402, Building No.4, Branch lane 2, Lane1324, Shuidian Road

    Objective
    To obtain a challenging position as a sales assistant of marketing with an emphasis in both global and domestic market sales.

    Education
    Institute: Fudan High School
    Period: 3 years (1999.09 2002.06)
    Institute: Shanghai University Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce
    Period: 3 years (2002.09 2005.06)
    Major: International Business Trade

    Academic Main Courses
    International Trade Theory
    International Management
    International Trade Laws
    Import and Export Practice
    Mathematics
    Monetary and Banking
    International Finance
    MIS
    Business Communication
    Organizational Behavior
    Microeconomics
    Macroeconomics
    Statistics
    Accounting
    Basic Marketing
    Global Marketing


    Practical Training Experience
    Period: 2 months
    Company: KeDi Advertisement Limited Company
    Job title: Vice Editor of XinPing Weekly Newspaper
    Key responsibilities & Achievements: Edition, composing, building website, typesetting, translation and taking DV

    Languages Skill
    Have a good command of both spoken and written English.
    Good command of translation.
    Passed CET-4

    Computer Applications
    Skilled in use of Win 95/98/2000/XP, Office 2000, HTML, SQL software, FrontPage, Dream weaver Flash, and building website.

    Scholarships
    2004.9 Shanghai University Second-class Scholarship

    Qualifications
    General business knowledge that relating to Global Marketing, Financial System and Monetary and Banking.
    High level of enthusiasm and commitment aim at successful marketing and sales career.
    Good at Planning and Organization and excellent in Interpersonal Communication skills.

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Laos

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 55,797
    #2
    I have known about your company Haier Group for several years and I really want to join this great family.

    This sentence doesn't do it for me. I'm not that impressed by your knowing about the company for severalyears, and don't like the word 'family'. Also, you should put the dasheson both sides of the name, but do youreally need to tell him the name of the company he works for?

  2. sunwenyu_25
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    #3

    Thanks for your comment.

    Quote Originally Posted by tdol
    I have known about your company Haier Group for several years and I really want to join this great family.

    This sentence doesn't do it for me. I'm not that impressed by your knowing about the company for severalyears, and don't like the word 'family'. Also, you should put the dasheson both sides of the name, but do youreally need to tell him the name of the company he works for?
    Thank you for your comment, it really helps a lot .:wink:

    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Laos

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 55,797
    #4
    Good command of translation.

    Which languages?

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