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    #1

    please correct with two sentences

    1. This is need to take time for the inspection and ex-factory at the same date, in order to catch cargo consolidation on Sept 17 to avoid failed.

    2. The normal vessel closing date is every Wednesday, therefore, please expedite your production to meet the inspection on 16 and catch vessel closing on 17 Sept.


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    Re: please correct with two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    1. This is need to take time for the inspection and ex-factory at the same date, in order to catch cargo consolidation on Sept 17 to avoid failed.

    It is necessary that the inspection and shipping from the factory take place on the same date in order to ensure cargo consolidation on 17 Sept.

    2. The normal vessel closing date is every Wednesday; therefore please expedite your production to meet the inspection on 16 Sept and catch vessel closing on 17 Sept.
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