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    please correct this text.

    Five countries, led by Ira, are responsible for the 32 execution of minors convicted by trials since 2005, according to a report issued today by the American organization "Human Rights Watch".



    hi there,
    is this text ok, please?
    thanks.


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    Re: please correct this text.

    Quote Originally Posted by jctgf View Post
    Five countries, led by Ira, are responsible for the 32 execution of minors convicted in trials since 2005 according to a report issued today by the American organization "Human Rights Watch".



    hi there,
    is this text ok, please?
    thanks.
    Two minor changes.

    Which country is "Ira"?

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    Re: please correct this text.

    Quote Originally Posted by Anglika View Post
    Two minor changes.

    Which country is "Ira"?
    Sorry, I meant Iran.
    Thanks.

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