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    • Join Date: Feb 2008
    • Posts: 28
    #1

    reminders

    Would you please proofread these sentences? Thank you.

    Due to some problems with your website we havenít been able to download the Excel file containing the non-responding companies. In order for us to send the reminders before the deadline please let us know as soon as you have solved the problem and the file is available.


    • Join Date: May 2008
    • Posts: 810
    #2

    Re: reminders

    Quote Originally Posted by michelle.siel View Post
    Would you please proofread these sentences? Thank you.


    Due to some problems with your website we haven’t been able to download the Excel file containing the non-responding companies. In order for us to send the reminders before the deadline, please let us know as soon as you have solved the problem and the file is available.
    I suggest adding a comma before please to mark the end of the subordinate clause. Other than that, it looks perfect to me.

    I am not a teacher.
    Last edited by colloquium; 15-Sep-2008 at 13:01.

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