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    #1

    Question those/these

    "Other rules that should be followed, of course these which comply with those given above, include..."

    Does this sentence read well? Or maybe I should change the places of those and these to have
    "Other rules that should be followed, of course those which comply with these given above, include..."?

    Or maybe "those" in both places would be fine?

    Thanks,
    Nyggus


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    #2

    Re: those/these

    Quote Originally Posted by nyggus View Post
    "Other rules that should be followed, of course these which comply with those given above, include..."

    Does this sentence read well? Or maybe I should change the places of those and these to have
    "Other rules that should be followed, of course those which comply with these given above, include..."?

    Or maybe "those" in both places would be fine?

    Thanks,
    Nyggus
    It does not make good sense as it stands. Try

    "Other rules that should be followed, particularly the ones that comply with those given above, include...

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