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    Are there any mistakes, oddities, or jerks in the following text?

    My school has its own LAN. Members from different faculties can easily interact and share information with each other. Having its own network assists it in keep privacy. That is, no outsider can view or steal information from the computers linked to the network.

    Mr. Nutty

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    Re: Proofreading

    What sort of school is it? Schools are divided by years not faculties in the UK so it sounds strange to me.

    Having its own network, the school can safeguard privacy.

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