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    #1

    check error

    hi,


    anything wrong with the sentence below?

    "We will wait a couple of days more. We will inform you once we have got it."


    Thank you.



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    Re: check error

    Looks OK to me, but could be cleaned up a little...

    We'll wait a few more days and inform you once received.


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    Re: check error

    Quote Originally Posted by Cypriot View Post
    Looks OK to me, but could be cleaned up a little...

    We'll wait a few more days and inform you once received.
    Unless there is a preceding sentence identifying something, this leaves a doubt as to what "received" relates to. It would be clearer to add "it has been received" - or to name the item being received.

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