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  1. mylevt's Avatar
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    #1

    spacious

    Hi,
    "The post office is equipped with advanced technology and a spacious, pretty space for transactions."
    Is "spacious" redundant in the sentence? If I kept "spacious", would it correct to replace "space" with "place"?
    -> "The post office is equipped with advanced technology and a spacious, pretty place for transactions."
    Thanks.

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    Re: spacious

    Quote Originally Posted by mylevt View Post
    Hi,
    "The post office is equipped with advanced technology and a spacious, pretty space for transactions."
    Is "spacious" redundant in the sentence? If I kept "spacious", would it correct to replace "space" with "place"?
    -> "The post office is equipped with advanced technology and a spacious, pretty place for transactions."
    Thanks.
    Yes, your amendment is better. I'd replace "pretty" with "attractive".

  3. mylevt's Avatar
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    #3

    Re: spacious

    Thank you, Raymott, so much.

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