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    please correct my text

    Why the goods were shipped last Friday? Christine has informed you that you should provide your L/G before shipment; otherwise you need to rework all the goods. Please send it in this morning, otherwise, we will request our forward to draw out the goods and return to you for rework. Your company need to bear all the the expense / All the cost will be responsible by your company.
    Last edited by Zoe2008; 19-Sep-2008 at 16:21.

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    Exclamation Re: please correct my text

    Why were the goods shipped last Friday? Christine has informed you (that you should) to provide your L/C before shipment; otherwise you need to rework all the goods. Please send it (in) this morning, failing which (otherwise,) we will request our forwarding agent to draw back (out) the goods and return to you for rework. In such an event, your company will be liable (need) to bear all the expense. (/ All the cost will be responsible by your company.)

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