I have made some alterations; they aren't prefect - but the letter is certainly more grammatical.2180 El Corregidor Avenue La Molina City. Zip : L12 September 18th, 2008
Dear Sir García,
This letter is with regards to your cultural promotion agent position. I am very interested in the opportuinity to work as a part of your prestigious promotional organization of tourism in Peru.
I possess the skills and the required attributes to be an excelent cultural promotion agent, and I would take the responsibilites of the role very seriously and work hard to maintain true Peruvian values and customs within the job. As you will see from my curriculum vitae, I have experience in customer service roles, and feel that I would be able to improve your customer service levels by offering effective customer service skills which I have developed in previous roles.
As a member of your staff, I would place emphasis on the importance of teamwork. I would work towards finding new ways to invite people to visit Peru through developing new strategies to attract foreigners and tourists who are attracted to the country's constantly improving image.
I would be privileged to work on your staff, because our country is presently regarded as one of the most interesting and adventurous places to visit, and this is an image I want to represent and promote.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Mr Renato García
I am not a teacher.
Student or Learner