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As per the sketch provided, it was supposed to be received 45 brackets, but we received only 30 brackets.
Regarding the sketch provided, we were supposed to recive 45 brackets, but we only received 30.
This eliminates the complex passive voice, and sound more natural.
Let me know if this works for you (conveys the message you want to convey).
Last edited by Tdol; 21-Sep-2008 at 12:59. Reason: typo