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    Post Kindly correct the following sentences

    As per the sketch provided, it was supposed to be received 45 brackets, but we received only 30 brackets.

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    Wink Re: Kindly correct the following sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by JRD View Post
    As per the sketch provided, it was supposed to be received 45 brackets, but we received only 30 brackets.
    I would be better to see the sentence in more context, but how does this :
    look:
    Regarding the sketch provided, we were supposed to recive 45 brackets, but we only received 30.

    This eliminates the complex passive voice, and sound more natural.

    Let me know if this works for you (conveys the message you want to convey).
    -Les
    Last edited by Tdol; 21-Sep-2008 at 12:59. Reason: typo

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