..1. How is the schedule? Even through this is a preliminary schedule which can give us some idea of what you are planning to advise our customer, instead of it is too late and any complain from themit will be too late for them to make any change or complaint. Please help to advise revise it ASAP.
2. We noted the mass production will be started on Sept 27 and finished by the next date [??next date - what is the next date in this context?]. It will be too late as there are the national holidays from Oct 01 to 05 which was explained you via the phone. As you need to take allow some buffer time in case the order fail for the inspection fails the inspection and needs to be reworked. Please try pull up the schedule as earliermuch as you can.
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