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  1. dahlia01
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    Post I failed this essay. Could someone help correct it?

    http://sarahst.com/nessay.doc

    It's a narrative about a personal experience, and the professor said I have too many comma splices and sentence structure problems.

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    Re: I failed this essay. Could someone help correct it?

    What writing level is your class?

    The story is not written that badly.

    What did you "fail"?


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    Re: I failed this essay. Could someone help correct it?

    thanks for your help.

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