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  1. black cat's Avatar

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    please i need your help

    Please I put this underline words in sentences so can you please check if they are right.
    1- If you have a problem you can ask a help from counsellors.
    2- I can use the encyclopedia to find a map of Indonesia.
    3- I'm curious, I want to know what happen to him.
    4- Every one should have a plan for his life.
    5- I can't concentrate so I can't answer your question about math.
    6- He is a talented boy. He knows how to draw a picture.
    7- Cheating is not permitted in class.
    8- You should give your report before the deadline.
    9- I always read the local news.
    10- He is an independent boy, he always do his homework alone.

  2. Raymott's Avatar
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    • Join Date: Jun 2008
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    Re: please i need your help

    Quote Originally Posted by black cat View Post
    Please I put this underline words in sentences so can you please check if they are right.
    If you had alternative words, it would have been useful to put them at the end of the sentence; they may have been better

    1- If you have a problem you can ask for help from counsellors.
    2- I can use the encyclopedia to find a map of Indonesia. Maybe; an atlas is better.
    3- I'm curious. I want to know what happen to him.
    4- Every one should have a plan for his life.
    5- I can't concentrate so I can't answer your question about math.
    6- He is a talented boy. He knows how to draw a picture.
    7- Cheating is not permitted in class.
    8- You should give your report before the deadline.
    9- I always read the local news.
    10- He is an independent boy. He always does his homework alone.
    Your main words are OK.
    You used 2 comma splices, in 3 and 10. In English, you can't join two sentences with a comma.

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