Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. SunMoon's Avatar

    • Join Date: Aug 2008
    • Posts: 197
    #1

    Question Headquarters’ managers and proofreding, please...?

    Can someone proofread my text?

    I gained experience in IT management within xxxx where my role was to coach headquarters’ managers inside the IT area, improving their departments, outlining new processes, managing external and internal changes, reviewing contract with third parties, finding outsourcing opportunities, improving their staff.

    Is headquarters’ managers correct or have I to write headquarters managers instead?


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
    • Posts: 19,434
    #2

    Re: Headquarters’ managers and proofreding, please...?

    Quote Originally Posted by SunMoon View Post
    Can someone proofread my text?

    I gained experience in IT management within xxxx where my role was to coach headquarters’ managers inside the IT area, [senior IT managers// IT managers from the headquarters] improving their departments, outlining new processes, managing external and internal changes, reviewing contracts with third parties, finding outsourcing opportunities, improving their staff.

    Is headquarters’ managers correct or have I to write headquarters managers instead?
    I have made two alternative suggestions.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •