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    #1

    Please correct my grammar

    Our QC went to your factory for online inspection on Sept 23, but there was no production running. We had re-confirmed to require for online inspection with you on Sept 22, but it is puzzled that the production line had not been started. Our online inspection is to avoid any problem at initial production, while it is very disappointed that your side did not cooperate with us which waste our manpower and time as this is not the first time the same problem happened. Please double check your production and provide us your updated schedule ASAP. Remember to send the corrective action to Mr. Wai before you start the production, the points raised by him was sent by a separate email.


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    Re: Please correct my grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Our QC went to your factory for online inspection on Sept 23, but there was no production running. We had re-confirmed that we would carry out an but it is online inspection with you on Sept 22, so are puzzled that the production line had not been started. Our online inspection is to avoid any problem at initial production, so it is very disappointing that your side did not cooperate with us which wastes our manpower and time as this is not the first time the same problem has happened. Please double check your production and provide us with your updated schedule ASAP. Remember to send the corrective action to Mr. Wai before you start the production. The points raised by him were sent by a separate email.
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