I've written some sentences but not sure of their accuracy. I'd like you to please proofread these sentences so that I will avoid the same error next time.
" The management has revised some rules and will impose them with effect from 06th October, 2008. All the teachers will abide by these rules with no exception.
(i) Teachers will now be allowd to avail permitted one day leave with pay each month. But after seizing this opportunityThereafter absence without leave will lead to one day's salary will be being deducted on one ansence for one day's absence, two days' salary for two days' absence, and so on.
(ii) Regular and punctual teachers will be rewarded with an additional 100 PKR each month for their regularity and punctuality. But any type of irregularity or absence whether approved or unapproved will cause the loss of this reward.
(iii) One month salary bonus will be given to those teachers whose attandance was 100 per cent during the whole academic session. This bonus will be given at the end of the academic session.
(iv) For three late arrivals, one day's salary will be deducted.
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