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    Please check.

    Hello,

    Could you please proofread these sentences for me.
    Your help is highly appreciated.

    1. The car sales raised of 1.5 millions in April.
    2. The turnover of the Apolo Company went down by 5% last year.
    3. By the end of the year, the employees' wages will be increased of 10%.
    4. There was a rise in Gary's last pay of 200 dollars.
    5. It looks like the sales have improved of 15% at the moment.

    Thanks in advance.

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    Re: Please check.

    1. The car sales raised 1.5 millions in April. No 'of'. Unless you mean that sales increased? In which case it's 'increased by'.
    2. The turnover of the Apolo Company went down by 5% last year.
    3. By the end of the year, the employees' wages will be increased by 10%.
    4. There was a rise in Gary's last pay of 200 dollars.
    5. It looks like the sales have improved by 15% at the moment.

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