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Hi Teachers, I have wrote a paragraph. Please help me to check grammar mistakes or rephrase them.
As the eldest son of "Runway Sting", he cracked into the wrestling business under his father influence. With his knee mind to the business, he follows in his father footsteps as businessman and wrestler. His all-round wrestling skills has been polished by the exclusive training from some veterans like Whistler, Black Hat Biley. The result was proved to be successful, after his debut match against Whister before 1000 audience. Many thinks that he can go far if he doesn't turn stale in wrestling.
P.S I want to say he is a wrestler and also a businessman in the wrestling company, should I add "a" before "businessman and wrestler"?
That's better! I was rather taken with "knee mind", though.