Can I write a letter to my boss who is on vacation?

[sweetie123]

Dear Teacher,

Can I write a letter as following to my Boss who is on vacation?

Dear Sir,

Thanks a lot for the greetings. Hope everything will be okay and wish weather will be fine soon there. Take care of yourself and enjoy the vacation.

Everything here is going on smooth and we are taking care of with the pending jobs and updates. Document filing system has been created with easy search options. And the New software has been developed to keep all the important data updated in one place for the ready reference and information for our Sales Team.

I hope you can reach Microsoft Outlook remotely to read all the important emails. If you find any difficulty with the remote access to the Microsoft Outlook, please inform me so that I can forward the important emails to your personal email address.

Take care of your health. Convey regards to Madam.

Sincerely yours

[Anglika]

Dear Teacher,

Can I write a letter as following to my Boss who is on vacation?

Dear Sir,

Thanks a lot for the greetings. I hope everything will be okay and that the weather there will be fine soon. Take care of yourself and enjoy the vacation.

Everything here is going on smoothly and we are taking care of all the pending jobs and updates. A document filing system has been created with easy search options, and the new software has been developed to keep all the important data updated in one place for easy reference and information for our Sales Team.

I hope you can reach Microsoft Outlook remotely to read all the important emails. If you find any difficulty with this, please inform me so that I can forward the important emails to your personal email address.

Take care of your health. Please convey my regards to your wife.

Yours sincerely

To me, it is very odd to address your boss as "Sir" and not by his name.