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    • Join Date: Nov 2007
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    Please correct the sentence:

    Dear Sirs,

    Please correct the following sentence:

    To devise a strategy for evaluating the programme effectiveness of a scheme in a holistic perspective with reference to international benchmarks and practices.

    Can we say "to devise strategy" or "to devise strategies"; "in a holistic perspective" or "from a holistic perspective"?

    Thank you very much!

    Regards,
    ILY


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    Re: Please correct the sentence:

    To devise a strategy for evaluating the effectiveness of a scheme from a holistic perspective with reference to international benchmarks and practices.

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