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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    using them instead of those.

    please, make corrections / rephrase the following:

    Computer could be more useful to us if we understand those machines. In order to know them well, we must first learn some very basic facts about them.

    can i use "them" instead of "those".

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    #2

    Re: using them instead of those.

    Computer could be more useful to us if we understood them better. In order to know them well, we must first learn some very basic facts about them.

    My suggestions are in red.

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    #3

    Re: using them instead of those.

    I neglected to put an 's' at the end of 'computer', it is necessary.

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    #4

    Re: using them instead of those.

    Computers can be more useful to us if we just understand them better.



    is this ok too?

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    #5

    Re: using them instead of those.

    Yes it's fine.

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