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    #1

    mountain was developed

    Can I have your comments in the following sentence?

    1. Instead of mountains, we just found a hill, which was being developed to a golf course. We could not hiking. We just heard noise sound.

    2. Most castles were renovated as shops. Even though we expected well -preserved old castle, it looked like an ordinary shop.

    3. we expected clear see, sunshine and tanning but all we found was dirty beach covered with trash.

    4. Your false ad ruined my holiday.


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    #2

    Re: mountain was developed

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    Can I have your comments on the following sentences?

    1. Instead of mountains, we just found a hill, which was being developed as a golf course. We could not go/do any hiking. We just heard noise sound. and it was noisy all the time.

    2. Most castles were renovated as shops. Even though we We had expected a well-preserved old castle, but it looked like an ordinary shop.

    3. we expected clear sea, clean beaches and lots of sunshine but all we found was a dirty beach covered with trash.

    4. Your false ad Believing in the claims of your advertisment ruined my holiday.
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