So here is my second essay for today. I was asked to write about a modern technological invention which changed to worlds communciation, so i wrote about the internet.
I´m not sure if the word "entity" can be used the way I did. When it eliminates your understanding, just replace it with "character".
"In today’s world, global communication is one of the most important things. Therefore, a recent technological invention with hugh huge ["Hugh" is a man's name] influence is the Internet. The Internet’s importance is based on its speed, the possibility to find of finding/of contacting people around the world and its entity value as an open information source.
The speed of the Internet is a really important advantage. At the beginning of the 19th century the delivery of mails took weeks or even month when writing someone in another country. Even the fast OMIT telephone cannot diminish the importance of the Internet, since documents like contracts can be attached to emails/e-mails.
While preparing for the TOEFL-Test I use another advantage of the Internet, by communicating with people around the world. After one week of searching I found a handful of people from English-speaking countries like the US, Great Britain or Canada who wanted to learn German. I offered them lessons in German language OMIT , while they tough taught me English in reward return. This win-win situation would never have been accomplished possible without the invention of the Internet.
However, my main argument for choosing the Internet is that everyone can get information on for himself. Due to the enormous amount of news from lots of sources, different views on important topics can be read. In times of war, for example, all newspapers and tv programmes normally support the country they were settled are based in. In earlier times you were depended dependent on these sources to make up your mind. Today everyone can search the Internet for unpopular states alternative views of such topics.
No modern invention has influenced our lifes lives like the internet did as much as the Internet. This worldwide network enables us to find people who share common interests and provides fast and independent sources of news.
The internet is one of the most important entities in today’s life and will maintain this influence for a long time."
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