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    Question Please proof read the invitation.

    Dear teachers!
    Can anyone please proofread the invitation I wrote?

    In the name of Allah who the is Most Beneficent and Most Merciful
    MR. & MRS. USMANI
    Request the honour of your presence
    at the auspicious occasion of the
    WEDDING CEREMONY
    of their beloved daughter
    Gul Afroz Usmani
    With
    Mohammad Farooq
    S/o Liaq Ahmed (Late)
    Insha Allah on Tuesday 28th of October, 2008 at
    ASHRAF COMMUNITY CENTRE
    Block W North Nazimabad,
    near Board of Secondary Education Karachi.

    Awaiting to Welcome
    All Family Members


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    Re: Please proof read the invitation.

    In the name of Allah who is [the] Most Beneficent and Most Merciful


    Here we put "RSVP" on the bottom, meaning we expect people to tell us if they are accepting the invitation or are not able to accept it. Would you expect this?

    Otherwise it looks fine - and many congratulations!

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